Rondeau poetry

Look!! Life has brought us here
Where life seems to be nowhere

I feel you – a stranger in my house
Though seven promises have                                                 tagged us spouse

We promised love , support and care
But not a single moment we share
You stand beside me – oh!! its too rare!!

Miles of distance and unknown doubts

Look!! Life has brought us here

Hope one day we’ll exchange our tears

I’ll lie in your arms without any fear

Then we’ll share coffee and the couch
Love , laughter and life will be all around

We’ll be one with distinction not clear

Look!! Life has brought us here.

( A Rondeau poetry is a short poem consisting of 15 lines that havr two rhymes throughout. The first few words or phrase from the first line are repeated twice in the poem as refrain. The rhyme scheme is –
       aabbaaabAaabbaA
A- is the refrain.)

I tried it just to try myself out. Surely  cannot match some of the brilliant writers like shweta dave and saru singhal , and many others but hope you all will like my effort … your suggestions and advices are openly welcomed.
Would love to read your remarks.

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